Every time you line up at the counter in an orderly queue
You are always bound to come up against these typical few
The big-bellied, belching man whose paunch is big enough for two
He’ll let out sneaky, smelly farts and look around, pretending it was you
The nose-in-the-air bottle-blonde bimbette who is blasΓ© in cutting the line
Without a by-your-leave, ‘coz she thinks only we minions have the time
The mother with the cranky, cantankerous kid she can’t control
You get so damn irritated that you let her ahead towards the common goal
Then you’ll have a sloppy teenager with earphones, Snapchatting and in a daze
Standing as if in a trance, that makes you want to slap him across his face
A doddering senior citizen with a cane and small plastic basket
Whom you pity and let through before it’s their time to be laid out in a casket
The extra-smart type who’ll very shiftily try to get ahead
“Oh, sorry, I didn’t see you!” and you reply sarcastically, “Yeah, sure, Fred!”
The guy with a mean-tempered, snarling dog who’s drooling spittle
That’s his ticket to the head of the line, we others mean little
The politically connected, gold-heavy bully, who thinks it is his birthright
To jump the queue; him & his cronies, it’s probably wise not to fight
Of course there will be more than one smartphone junkie
Texting, tweeting, pouting, taking selfie after duck-face selfie
The intrusive woman you want to ignore, who persists in making conversation
Asking personal questions, voicing her opinion that everything’s an abomination
And then there are the ones who insist on standing a foot too close
Brushing against you so you can smell the acrid sweat on their clothes
Finally when it’s your turn, the window shuts – and I swear this is invariably true
It’s lunch time and you know how bureaucrats work, what else can you do
Stand in place an hour or more, or go right to the back
And come across the very same folks who in manners quite lack
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Ha ha. Very well written and so true.
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Thanks, Smita π
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Yeah. Egxactly !
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Isn’t it? Thanks, how’s you?
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I am good , thank you.
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Great to hear!
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Oh my gosh, this is so true! This poem is spot on! Love it! π
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Thank you! π
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Brought a smile to my face.
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I’m glad! Thanks!!
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Hahaha so true Kunal. This is exactly what happens when we stand in a queue.
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Thank you, Kamal! Hope you had a great Diwali!
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Welcome Kunal and you too have a great Diwali.
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I did…now it’s work again!
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Yes absolutely all enjoyed last week now back to work.
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Lovely!! Beautifully penned down
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Thanks π
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Haha! So well described Kunal. I dread at the thought of standing in one such queue.
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You haven’t been to a Govt office recently, then? Or if you remember, the demonetisation bank queues?? Thanks, Radhika!
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Luckily not in the recent past. But recall standing in many such queues earlier specially during college days, bank, govt offices, train pass renewals …..list goes on and on ππ
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To be honest, things are better now. But babus will always find a way of making things take longer!
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Oh yes, it took a full day for my husband last month at the registrar’s office to complete a simple registration formality.
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Very well worded with perfect description π
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Thank you, ji!
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Hahaha….. wonderfully realistic write, Kunal! I feel the pain and agony of it all ππ
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Thanks, Vidur π
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Oy vey! Don’t get me started!
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Hahaha, it’s the same everywhere, isn’t it? Thanks, Marissa!
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It gave me a flash back of my demonetisation days! And it is definitely a pain!
Though I literally enjoyed your verse. Precise and sarcastic it is! π
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Thanks ππ½
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The title just about says it all! I try very hard to take those moments as learning opportunities. If it’s a challenge, we must need it. π
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Thank you for this, my friend
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