Idle stroll through idyllic woods
Hands clasped, sun on our backs, feeling alive
Amid the sights, sounds, smells of nature
Shadows stretching out before us
Me, wishing the moment lasts as long
And thinking, each step we walk together,
Is it towards something?
You need not be heading towards anything or anywhere… and that (for me) is freedom
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While I agree, the heart says otherwise π
Thanks, S, and Eid Mubarak in advance!
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Thank you…Can’t wait now!
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You said this well I totally agree!
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Beautiful thought. Nothing is ever enough, the mind will bring in the future even in a beautiful present moment.
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True, Aseem. Thanks!
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Even if it is not towards something, then just simply a walk like this will be full of magical moments.
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Yes, you’re right.
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Wishing the moment lasts longer, and still wondering about the direction…..I love the thought of this dilemma!
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Thanks, buddy!
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ah, so much and so little time…
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Yes, it always seems so! Thank you!
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Beautiful, as always.
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Thank you
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This was really great! Your last line is a perfect capture of what every woman wants to know – Is this going somewhere? Ha! Very Well Done!
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…And some of us men, too! π
Thanks!
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It’s nostalgic and wistful. I feel the longing. You know , the poetry is so good, I felt like reading it again and again. And I did. You write with so much heart.
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Thanks, that’s a really nice comment
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You are welcome, Kunal.
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Missed you, dear friend!
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π
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I wish I knew where am I headedπ’
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Awww…. tc
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I will. I have no option
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Thanks
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Beautiful poem. . I think love heads one towards happiness
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Hi Himali! Long time… thanks… all well with you?
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All going great.. Back to blogging after a long break π
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Great!
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Magnificent! ππΉπΉ
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Thanks!
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Great poem… maybe (as we all do) they just create their own paths as they walk along!? π
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Yeah, you’re right! Thank you so much!
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Lovely! the walk in the parkπ
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Thanks, Chevy! …..woods, actually π
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Yes, I remember nowπ I always thought men ran a mile when a woman asked that question.
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Hahahaha
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Lovely! glad I made you laughπ
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Love this!β€οΈ
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Thank you!
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Love this Kunal. Conjures up lots of emotions and feelings
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Thanks!
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