Punctuated by commas,
A couple of exclamation points,
A couple of question marks,
A hyphen or two,
Many a word had woven their way
Across the lines.
Strung together, broken, separated.
The mind seeking closure,
The time had come
To put a period mark.
As the hand finished drawing the dot,
The heart seeking extension,
Added two more.
The full stop
Became an ellipsis,
For the long-winding sentence
To be continued…
So clever and so poignant…
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Thank you, Joan 😊
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This is great! It somehow gives me a sense of hope for something to be restored or resolved.
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I’m so pleased to hear, thank you!
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Wonderful. Evoking.
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Appreciate it, my friend!
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I like the ellipses -it leaves room for anticipating, the unexpected, the surprises, the things we feel but can’t/don’t say. You are always clever with words!
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Thank you, Chevvy! Aren’t you off already? And btw, where to, if you don’t mind?
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Ah! if you’re referring to my travels, that’s only at the end of the year. A little while ago, I did a post on wanting to go to Malta. So we’ve now set the wheels in motion for Christmas and New Year – Malta, Venice and a bit of Paris. Flights and accommodation booked but it’s lots of fun planning the itinerary and leaving room for the ellipses.😀
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LOL, ellipses! Wow, lucky you, X’mas in Paris/Venice! Good luck!
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Thank you Kunal. Yeah, I’m impulsive that way. It will be Christmas in Malta and New Year in Venice. We’ll just do a day trip from Venice to Paris and back. I’ve been missing my travel bug😀
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Go for it!
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😀
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So specific!! Made positive meaning
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Thank you
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Welcome 😊
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Lives are similar to sentences with a beginning and an end — it’s the in between where we find the hidden meanings. Original and brilliant work. Bravo! xo
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Thanks! 🙂
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Very well structured.
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Thanks, Miriam 🙂
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great humor!
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Thanks, Amit. Kemon achho?
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doing as best as i can Dada on the face of rising tribalism…
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This was a good read! =)
It felt like the person wants to do something, and at the same time doesn’t… Quite thought-provoking.
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Thanks!
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This is so deeply profound!❤️
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Thanks, Sanaa. God bless!
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aaaaaaah. this captured writing a lot, the experience of it. beautiful
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Thanks, Rosema!
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you’re welcome, Kunal!
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It is so logical. Looking forward to the continuation.
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Thank you, Sagarika. 😊
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