June 1, 2017June 4, 2017 by Kunal Thakore

Breathing You In

love, Poetry, ramblings
expectation, holding breath, holding hands, inhale, release, won't let go
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You hold my hand

And I hold my breath

An inhalation of expectation

That I cannot bring myself to release

Lest you let go

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rugby843 June 1, 2017 at 1:26 am

Lovely!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 1:28 am
  
  Many thanks 🙏🏽
  
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thespiritkeeper June 1, 2017 at 1:26 am

I really like this. Well penned

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 1:29 am
  
  Thank you, appreciate it!
  
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  1. thespiritkeeper June 1, 2017 at 2:34 am
    
    🙂
    
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Emily June 1, 2017 at 2:14 am

Oh my… ❤

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 2:15 am
  
  Thanks, Emily 👍
  
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radhikasreflection June 1, 2017 at 2:45 am

Aha! What a beautiful expression Kunal !!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 2:47 am
  
  Thank you! My favourite line here is the “inhalation of expectation”
  
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  1. radhikasreflection June 1, 2017 at 2:48 am
    
    Yes, without doubt. Expectation is a very heavy and loaded!
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 2:49 am
    
    🙂 Thanks
    
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Sonderwriter June 1, 2017 at 3:23 am

Incredible! I can really relate to the feeling that is portrayed from this

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 4:03 am
  
  Thank you!!! 🙂
  
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Miriam June 1, 2017 at 3:58 am

Heavy sigh. ❤️ This is lovely

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 4:04 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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mathias sager June 1, 2017 at 4:13 am

From the reader I saw only the first two lines, which caused me already to hold my breath. Strong!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 4:47 am
  
  Hey, thanks, Mathias! Am glad you liked it!
  
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boundlessblessingsblog June 1, 2017 at 5:14 am

Wow what beautiful lines articulated. Great Kunal.

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 5:17 am
  
  Thanks, Kamal!
  
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  1. boundlessblessingsblog June 1, 2017 at 6:08 am
    
    Welcome Kunal.
    
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ZenLikeFuck June 1, 2017 at 7:07 am

Oh how you’ve captured this sweet fleeting moment! Beautiful!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 2:10 pm
  
  Thanks, Tanya!
  
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pennylanethoughts June 1, 2017 at 2:46 pm

Just beautiful!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 2:54 pm
  
  Thanks! 😊
  
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yagneshthakore June 1, 2017 at 4:58 pm

Lovely.

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 5:10 pm
  
  Thanks, dad!
  
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chevvy8 June 2, 2017 at 4:05 am

Ah! the double entendre in the last line! where are my smelling salts. I am smitten 😀 Lovely one Kunal!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 2, 2017 at 4:46 am
  
  😀 thank you, dear friend!
  
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  1. chevvy8 June 2, 2017 at 5:50 am
    
    My perfect pleasure 😀
    
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dornahainds June 3, 2017 at 10:22 pm

Excellent! 🌹🌹🌹😎

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1. Kunal Thakore June 4, 2017 at 3:41 am
  
  🙏🏽 Thanks
  
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clinock June 4, 2017 at 7:42 am

A lovely and sensitive dance between image and words Kunal. Is the photo yours?

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1. Kunal Thakore June 4, 2017 at 8:02 am
  
  Thank you….. again, no, I’m afraid 😊
  
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yassy June 5, 2017 at 6:53 am

How did I miss this

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1. Kunal Thakore June 5, 2017 at 6:54 am
  
  What? You haven’t breathed since I posted?
  
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  1. yassy June 5, 2017 at 6:55 am
    
    Nah , after I read your post silly
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore June 5, 2017 at 6:55 am
    
    I know, I know
    
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  3. yassy June 5, 2017 at 6:56 am
    
    Knowing is good 😊
    
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yassy June 5, 2017 at 6:54 am

Wow. I held my breath as I read. You get the reader!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 5, 2017 at 6:55 am
  
  I guess that’s a compliment, so thanks! 😉
  
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  1. yassy June 5, 2017 at 6:55 am
    
    You write so good 😊
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore June 5, 2017 at 6:56 am
    
    Thanks, Yasmin
    
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  3. yassy June 5, 2017 at 6:57 am
    
    Hey, what post did I miss, I have to treat myself to your diary post. Dud you do a phone one? So I sound dumb
    
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  4. Kunal Thakore June 5, 2017 at 7:01 am
    
    Huh? Sorry, garbled…
    
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  5. yassy June 5, 2017 at 7:13 am
    
    It’s ok.
    
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Esther June 5, 2017 at 7:52 am

I like this😃

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1. Kunal Thakore June 5, 2017 at 8:01 am
  
  Thanks, Esther! Pleased to meet you 🙂
  
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Apple Hill Cottage June 7, 2017 at 1:40 pm

Lovely. And thank you for reading and liking some of my simple poetry. Playing with words is a lovely pastime, eh?😀

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1. Kunal Thakore June 7, 2017 at 1:42 pm
  
  My pleasure! And yes, it is!
  
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vidur sahdev June 8, 2017 at 6:30 pm

Wow!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 9, 2017 at 2:22 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa) June 10, 2017 at 8:13 am

Beautifully tender and romantic! 😀

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1. Kunal Thakore June 10, 2017 at 10:16 am
  
  Thank you, Sanaa
  
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shalini June 11, 2017 at 4:23 pm

Beautiful

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1. Kunal Thakore June 12, 2017 at 3:06 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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Kunal Thakore June 2, 2020 at 4:28 pm

Reblogged this on random rants ruminations ramblings.

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Akhiz June 4, 2020 at 3:17 am

nice one 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore June 4, 2020 at 7:57 am
  
  Thanks, Akhil! Kaise ho? Safe & doing well, I hope?
  
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  1. Akhiz June 7, 2020 at 4:06 am
    
    Yup i am doing fine, thank God, hope you are doin good as well.
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore June 7, 2020 at 8:32 am
    
    👍🙏🏽
    
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