May 30, 2017May 30, 2017 by Kunal Thakore

An outpouring of crimson

love gone bad, Poetry, ramblings, soured relationship
blood, blot, body, Conscience, crimson, porous, seeped into earth, sieve, slashed wrist, suicide, traces
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Her tears flowed

Diluting the blood

From slashed wrist

Into a salty puddle on the floor.

Her body would be picked up

The blot, mopped

But traces of lost love would forever remain seeped into the earth.

Much like it sieved through his porous heart

but remained deep on his conscience

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writteninthestars2016 May 30, 2017 at 1:24 am

Sad, heartbreaking, and still beautiful. I feel this. 🌟

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1. Kunal Thakore May 30, 2017 at 1:33 am
  
  Thank you! 😊
  
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yassy May 30, 2017 at 2:08 am

I pictured this as I read. You do cinematography with your words.

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1. Kunal Thakore May 30, 2017 at 2:12 am
  
  Thanks, Yas, that’s a lovely comment
  
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  1. yassy May 30, 2017 at 2:14 am
    
    For a lovely person who writes even lovelier. 👍😊
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore May 30, 2017 at 2:18 am
    
    Not used to early morning praise, Y! 😜
    But I’ll accept with gratitude
    
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radhikasreflection May 30, 2017 at 2:57 am

Pain oozes out as I read your verses Kunal. Dil ko choo gaya!!

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1. Kunal Thakore May 30, 2017 at 3:16 am
  
  Thank you, Radhika
  
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Miriam May 30, 2017 at 4:45 am

Such powerful heartbreaking words.

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1. Kunal Thakore May 30, 2017 at 6:25 am
  
  Thanks, Miriam! 🙂
  
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yagneshthakore May 30, 2017 at 6:57 am

Am lost for words.Great post my dear son.God Bless.

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1. Kunal Thakore May 30, 2017 at 7:06 am
  
  Thanks
  
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besondersite May 30, 2017 at 9:48 am

Beautiful and mind numbing!!

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1. Kunal Thakore May 30, 2017 at 9:53 am
  
  Thanks! 🙏🏽
  
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Sonya Kassam May 30, 2017 at 1:58 pm

Chilling!

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1. Kunal Thakore May 30, 2017 at 2:20 pm
  
  Thanks, Sonya
  
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Pleasant Street May 31, 2017 at 1:40 am

It is my hope that this is fiction…

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1. Kunal Thakore May 31, 2017 at 2:17 am
  
  Oh yes, made up entirely…. wouldn’t want this to happen to anyone 🙂
  
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Emily June 1, 2017 at 2:16 am

So vivid, Kunal.

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 2:17 am
  
  Thanks, again! A bit different for me, these dark ones
  
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  1. Emily June 1, 2017 at 2:18 am
    
    Yes, but excellent!
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 2:19 am
    
    Glad you liked it 🙏🏽
    
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ZenLikeFuck June 1, 2017 at 7:10 am

Love does push you to extremes. This one’s the saddest kind. Lovely and yet sad.

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1. Kunal Thakore June 1, 2017 at 2:10 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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chrisnelson61 June 3, 2017 at 10:18 am

Fabulous imagery!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 3, 2017 at 10:18 am
  
  Thanks, Chris 🙏🏽
  
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  1. chrisnelson61 June 3, 2017 at 10:23 am
    
    Welcome.
    
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clinock June 4, 2017 at 7:50 am

Is the art work yours Kunal? It’s wonderful…

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1. Kunal Thakore June 4, 2017 at 8:01 am
  
  Um, no! Google! I should have acknowledged…sorry about that!
  
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vidur sahdev June 8, 2017 at 6:34 pm

Intense emotions and amazing imagery, Kunal.

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1. Kunal Thakore June 9, 2017 at 2:23 am
  
  Appreciate it, Vidur, thanks!
  
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shiwani June 10, 2017 at 7:12 pm

This is great!!! I mean… it’s sad but it sort of has that strange pull. You can’t just help but think about it even after you’ve readv it.

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1. Kunal Thakore June 11, 2017 at 2:53 am
  
  Thank you!
  
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shiwani June 10, 2017 at 7:14 pm

Mr. Kunal, even I have written something like this and would really appreciate if you read it once.
https://wingedwords1997.wordpress.com

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1. Kunal Thakore June 11, 2017 at 2:54 am
  
  I have! And I liked it!! 😊
  
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  1. shiwani June 11, 2017 at 5:41 am
    
    Thank you… 😊
    
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