January 5, 2018January 1, 2018 by Kunal Thakore

Haiku #1

Heavy the heart

That’s weighed down, lightens burden

By shedding tears

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rugby843 January 5, 2018 at 1:58 am

Lovely

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1. Kunal Thakore January 5, 2018 at 3:05 am
  
  THank you, ma’am
  
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Aishwarya January 5, 2018 at 4:09 am

Wonderful Haiku and an even more amazing picture to go with it. Out of curiosity – Did the picture inspire you to write the Haiku or did you look for it once you had written it?

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1. Kunal Thakore January 5, 2018 at 5:58 am
  
  Thanks, A! Yes, that’s the way I generally prefer it. Rarely do I write backwards from a pic 🙂
  
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yagneshthakore January 5, 2018 at 4:14 am

You said it.

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1. Kunal Thakore January 5, 2018 at 5:58 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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eloquentparadise January 5, 2018 at 7:01 am

Cannot agree more. This is lovely!

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1. Kunal Thakore January 5, 2018 at 7:02 am
  
  Thanks, EP!!! 🙂
  
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  1. eloquentparadise January 5, 2018 at 7:11 am
    
    I like this abbreviation for my username. Hi Kunal, my name is Sakshi. 😊
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore January 5, 2018 at 7:22 am
    
    Hi, Sakshi, pleased to have met you 🙂
    
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  3. eloquentparadise January 5, 2018 at 7:30 am
    
    Likewise!
    
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thatmishmash January 5, 2018 at 7:07 am

True 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore January 5, 2018 at 7:20 am
  
  Thanks!!!
  
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dornahainds January 5, 2018 at 7:10 pm

Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀

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1. Kunal Thakore January 5, 2018 at 7:32 pm
  
  🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
  
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annika January 7, 2018 at 2:48 am

so simple and beautiful

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1. Kunal Thakore January 7, 2018 at 3:13 am
  
  Thanks, appreciate it!
  
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Lis January 12, 2018 at 6:45 pm

Short and sweet 🙂
https://thegrlwhoblog.wordpress.com/
❤

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Kunal Thakore January 13, 2018 at 1:19 am

That’s what haikus are, isn’t it? Thanks!! 😊🙏🏽

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1. mariewilliams53 January 15, 2018 at 6:13 pm
  
  Haikus are not always sweet, Kunal, but they are short. 🙂
  
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  1. Kunal Thakore January 16, 2018 at 1:24 am
    
    👍🙏🏽
    
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chevvy8 January 14, 2018 at 2:55 am

Glad to see you trying out HAIKUS, I love their brevity even though they may be filled with deep meaning.😀

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1. Kunal Thakore January 14, 2018 at 3:17 am
  
  Thanks! My first ever… 👏🏽
  
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  1. chevvy8 January 14, 2018 at 3:18 am
    
    Well done!
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore January 14, 2018 at 3:19 am
    
    👍🙏🏽
    
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Hammad Rais January 19, 2018 at 6:33 am

Wonderful first attempt this is. Very amazing 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore January 19, 2018 at 6:38 am
  
  Thank you!!!
  
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Eli Kyoko January 23, 2018 at 8:33 am

I love the thought! Beautiful haiku! 💖

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1. Kunal Thakore January 23, 2018 at 11:07 am
  
  Thanks, Eli!! 🙂
  
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Emily January 30, 2018 at 9:28 pm

And you know it’s bad when you can’t let it out. ❤

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1. Kunal Thakore January 31, 2018 at 5:30 am
  
  🙂
  Thanks, Em!
  
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