June 17, 2019June 13, 2019 by Kunal Thakore

Barren Blossom

life, love gone bad, metaphor, Poetry, ramblings, relationships, Thoughts
autumn, bloom, buds, leaves, seasons
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The gods mixed up the seasons
Our autumn arrived way too early
And the leaves fell
Even before the buds could bloom

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short-prose-fiction June 17, 2019 at 6:46 am

Beautiful!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 6:52 am
  
  Thank you 😊
  
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  1. short-prose-fiction June 17, 2019 at 6:52 am
    
    My pleasure 🙂
    
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Sakshi June 17, 2019 at 7:34 am

Beautiful ❤️

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1. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 8:36 am
  
  🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
  
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boundlessblessingsblog June 17, 2019 at 11:02 am

True and such a beautiful poem, Kunal. Loved the fallen leaves.

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1. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 11:10 am
  
  Suu, Kamal, ae toh maaru heart chhe 😀! Haha, thanks!!
  
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  1. boundlessblessingsblog June 17, 2019 at 11:12 am
    
    Hahaha bicharo heart broken thai gayo keh, K.
    
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  2. boundlessblessingsblog June 17, 2019 at 11:13 am
    
    Are Kunal did you download my poetry book.
    
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  3. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 12:21 pm
    
    No, sorry, I need to, I forgot
    
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  4. boundlessblessingsblog June 17, 2019 at 12:23 pm
    
    K never mind but If you have the time right now then you can go on Amazon Kindle and download the book and K just mane bolje na please cause pachi hu check karis on my Amazon account. It would be awesome if you could do so. Thanks for always encouraging me.
    
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  5. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 12:25 pm
    
    Kamal, I will pucca, but in the evening pls 🙂
    
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  6. boundlessblessingsblog June 17, 2019 at 12:31 pm
    
    KK do not worry dear K. It is completely k but just message me dear. Thanks a trillion always.
    
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yagneshthakore June 17, 2019 at 12:13 pm

Lovely, my son, just too lovely.

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1. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 12:21 pm
  
  Thank you
  
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Moushmi Radhanpara June 17, 2019 at 4:07 pm

Oh, this was beautiful!!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 4:12 pm
  
  Thank you, Moushmi 🙂
  
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yassy June 17, 2019 at 4:09 pm

Yeah, something like that is happening here, it’s hot and horrid and still the rains come and I swear like crazy but barren blossom is an awesome title.

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1. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 4:14 pm
  
  Thanks, Y!
  
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  1. yassy June 17, 2019 at 4:49 pm
    
    You are welcome, K🙂
    
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K Morris Poet June 17, 2019 at 4:12 pm

This speaks to me of climate change and perhaps also of love. As others have rightly said, its a beautiful poem, Kunal. Best – Kevin

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1. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 4:15 pm
  
  Hey, Kevin, thanks! The heart has its own seasons, unaffected by global climate change 🙂
  
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-Eugenia June 17, 2019 at 9:06 pm

Powerful and thought-provoking!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 17, 2019 at 9:42 pm
  
  Thank you, ma’am!
  
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syl65 June 17, 2019 at 11:55 pm

Feeling like Autumn here to, brother 😄

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1. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2019 at 7:07 am
  
  Hang in there, Syl! Many thanks for hopping in!
  
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  1. syl65 June 18, 2019 at 9:07 am
    
    Will do! My pleasure, Kunal!
    
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Shantanu Baruah June 18, 2019 at 5:11 am

Beautiful feeling you depicted in such few words

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1. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2019 at 7:08 am
  
  Thanks, S!
  
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  1. Shantanu Baruah June 18, 2019 at 7:22 am
    
    My absolute pleasure
    
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Yasmin Khan June 20, 2019 at 4:27 am

Deep and beautiful ❤️

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1. Kunal Thakore June 20, 2019 at 7:13 am
  
  Many thanks, Y, glad you think so!
  
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Infinite Living June 22, 2019 at 3:42 am

Loved the title and beautiful poem to follow

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1. Kunal Thakore June 22, 2019 at 7:22 am
  
  Happy to hear that! Many thanks!
  
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Saania2806 June 25, 2019 at 5:21 pm

So beautiful 💕

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1. Kunal Thakore June 25, 2019 at 6:12 pm
  
  Thanks, Saania, appreciate it, glad you liked it!
  
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  1. Saania2806 June 25, 2019 at 6:12 pm
    
    My pleasure, and nice to meet you! 👍
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore June 25, 2019 at 6:13 pm
    
    Ditto!
    
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A Humble Shadow July 4, 2019 at 11:56 pm

Short and with conclusion, nicely written
Grade A

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1. Kunal Thakore July 5, 2019 at 6:37 am
  
  Thank you ☺️
  
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