I hold an empty envelope
Its contents, long lost to time
A letter of declaration
A proclamation
A cherished confession
A confirmation
A cause for celebration
Missing substance,
The cover still feels heavy to the handΒ
An uninhabited piece of packing
Dog eared, scuffed, tattered and musty
The ink on the address label faded
The sender and her handwriting, a trace
The paper, sepia
Like my memories
All that remains is this empty envelope
I hold in my hands
In my hands
I hold an empty heart
Remarkable, poem echoes emptiness and nostalgia!!
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Thanks, Tanya!
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pleasure
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Great comparison.
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Thank you!!!
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You are welcome!
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Such a heart breaking finale…..but so beautifully articulated. Loved it Kunal π
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Many thanks for the encouragement, Sakshi!
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Pleasure was mine π
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Beautiful metaphor Kunal. Sad but true
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Very nice!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful π
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Shukriya!
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Lovely metaphor, K.
I can imagine your attic has quite a few of these…in different handwritings! π
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Thanks, Vidur, go on, rub it in!!! π
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Lovely ruminations.
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Thank you, maβam π
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You are a recipient of so many accolades. Just add mine to that! You never stop amazing me with your versatility.
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Thanks very much!!!
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Most welcome.
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Well written. You have the talentππΌππ»ππ»ππ»π
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Thank you very much!
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Youβre welcomeπ
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Such a beautiful, wistful verse!
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.
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I cried as I read but I loved it.
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Kya kahoon? Like Vidur said, they’re so many of them tucked away… sigh!
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Mine troubles me all the time , I want to shove my memory away.
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Take care, Yassy
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Thank you. I am doing just that
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Superb!π
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Reblogged this on I call her Mnimi and commented:
So written from the heart. Beautiful!!! β₯οΈ βοΈ
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Many thanks! ππ½
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So beautifully written, touching metaphor.
Yonnieπ
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Thanks, Yonnie!
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My pleasure πππ
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My pleasure, Kunal!
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