With forlorn and doleful expression
A lonely heart
With body cold
Her tears, moisture on which mould now grows
Looks across the garden of life
At the fallen twin flame
Unpaired and incomplete
Ass broken as she
A yin separated from her yang
Till united
In Heaven above
For lifetimes to come
* Photographs, my own, taken at a restaurant in Germany.
Beautiful Kunal. I’m used to you making me laugh…
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Thanks, EN! You’ve made me smile, I can tell you that! 😊
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Wow … . beautifully penned
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Thanks, Sakshi! 🙏🏽
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My pleasure 😊
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Love it. Strong connect.
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Thanks! 🙏🏽 Visiting after long…!
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Breathing back to life after long . I have been on a downward journey into a bottomless pit , just about finding my way out.
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Take care, P!
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Thank you .
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Lovely write Kunal !
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Thank you!!
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Beautiful, K!
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Thanks very much!
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This is beautifully written.
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Many thanks! 🙏🏽
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You are welcome.
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That’s deep and heartfelt. Nice work!
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Thank you!!!
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Deep, penetrating and oh-so forlorn in beautifully, poetically penned verse! Thank you, Kunal, and as always, blessings!
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Many thanks, Jonathan! And wish you the same!
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Deep and beautiful Kunal!
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Thanks, Radhika!
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Love the photos with the words – heart touching..happy for the ending 🙂
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🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
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For sure a heart that is helplessly fallen in shatters and splendid poem, Kunal. Poor heart all torn apart.
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Thank you, I’m glad it appealed to you!
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Yes such a beautiful and poor broken heart, Kunal.
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But thanks, all the same!
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My mobile acts weird sometimes 😳
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Arre, no worries!
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Ta !!
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Sorry about that. Somehow when I read this , it reminded me of myself and the way I think. Your verse is an echo and represents what we all feel. Kunal, I think I know you , I mean like a kindred spirit.
I love this. Only you could write a piece like this.
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I like that we’re kindred spirits. Our work does resonate strongly with each other. Thank you for your compliment, you’re a kind lady!
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Thank you kindly, kind sir.
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This was absolutely beautiful
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Glad you think so, many thanks!
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