The raindrop falls enthusiastically, exuberantly,
Drawn as it is towards the ground
With whom it is inextricably linked by destiny,
Dampening it with delirious delight.
It pauses not to think of the cloud
Which loves it perhaps more, but releases it selflessly,
Only to remain a dull grey, bereft of moisture.
But pleased yet at making fertile the earth.
As a parent does a grown child.
Godspeed, my love!
Woah.
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I assume that’s a like? 😊🙏🏽
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Hell yeah
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Muchas gracias, D
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Thakore😊
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Khan 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
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🦋🌈
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so tender Kunal, your words move me
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Thank you, Gina! We’re empty nesters from today…
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best wishes on that journey. it is hard to let go. but we love so we must
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So true! Heartfelt thanks, G
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This is sooooo beautiful — even without the last line – just the raindrop story….but the end is …oooooh — incredibly touching. My prayers for a beautiful journey in light and love for you and all your family – together always at heart – unlike the raindrop and the cloud. 🙂
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Thanks, KP, much appreciated!
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🙂
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Wonderfully written
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Thank you, sincerely!
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This is such a difficult time of life where the parent feels happiness and emptiness at the same time isn’t it? The emotions so well expressed, Kunal. Your son or daughter?? Wishing him/her best wishes in his/ her future endeavours.
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Daughter… many thanks, my dear
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Wow! I can certainly identify with this piece… Exquisitely beautiful!
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Thanks, J, many thanks!
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God bless her, and may she always be as safe as she was in your arms.
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Thanks, V, really appreciate it!
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Wish her all the success and happiness, and as for you….cheer up Dad, no more staying up late, waiting for her to be back!
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Dad will probably be up now at odd hours, given the time difference 🙂
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👍👍👍
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Your’e a good soul, Vidur! God bless!
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Grateful for your wishes, K.
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Thanks again, my friend
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So moving and so true. My grandson just left for college and my granddaughter leaves tomorrow and the grey cloud hovers.
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Thabnks!! Hang in there, Joan, it’s al I can say!
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Absolutely beautiful, perfect metaphor!
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🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽… and she’s come to your country, Annika! 😊
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Really? Then you must as well!
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🙏🏽 Will perforce visit more often now 😊
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just beautiful and very heart touching..
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Many thanks, old friend!
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Was actually expecting something something like this from you. Great post, my dear son. I had felt the same way when you went to the U.S., though you were not this young.
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🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
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Very sensitively written Kunal. When poetry comes from an actual experience, it connects deeper! Life is a balance between holding on and letting go -Rumi. Am in the same boat so maybe it touches deeper. May God guide her path.
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Thanks, Aseem! Yes, it came from the heart and is a dedication to all us parents at this moment. Am glad A is settled & you guys are back safe! Good luck to y’all as well!
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So deeply beautiful!
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🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
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This is truly beautiful!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
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Beautifully penned.
Yes, we have to let go even if it saddens our hearts.
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Thank you, Pranab! If I remember right, you had also done something similar some time ago for your daughter?
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Thanks for remembering. It was two years ago. Now she is going further south, transferring to UCSD.
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Ah, ok! All good luck to her!
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Thank you.
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Beautifully written, Kunal. Life is more rewarding when we give. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it.👍
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Oh, thank you for such a lovely comment!
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Awesome rrrr from a loving parent……. Wishing your not so little girl all the happiness life can give. Cheers.
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Thanks, buddy, appreciate it!
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Lovely.
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Thank you, sir
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A beautiful metaphor for the new empty nesters.
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Thanks, LuAnne! Just about coming to terms with what’s a new experience!
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I wish you well as you travel this new journey. Mine started nine years ago (OMG!) and we are good now. We talk to them often and have seen them a lot lately so we’re still in touch. I love that they are learning so much and sharing it with me. I feel blessed that teacher/learner roles of mother/daughter are gradually shifting to co-learner/co-teacher. It’s a good place to be. 🙂 Oh, I might want to write a poem about that! Thanks for the inspiration.
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Thanks, again! It helps knowing what to expect! Cheers, LuAnne! 😊
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Lovely and a brilliant comparison between raindrop/cloud and child/parent.
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Thank you! I appreciate you saying so!
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The analogy is beautiful 🙂
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Thanks… again!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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This is absolute words of wisdom. Great great words. I can relate this with my life.
Also, I have uploaded a new post on “Letting things Go and three ways to do it.” Here’s the link: http://thesoultalks10.com/letting-things-go-three-ways-to-do-it/
Would be glad to know your views.
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Thank you, Piyush! I’m glad it resonates. I’ll go across in a while…
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I’ll be waiting Kunal.
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Lovely lines!
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Thanks, Pradnya 😊
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[…] Letting Go […]
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Beautiful connection you made at the end
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Tx! It’s 5 years to the day that our daughter went abroad, so I reposted the original from 2018. Hope you & your’s are doing well?
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Oh you must be missing her much. We are all fine thank you, surviving 🙂
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TC, as always
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