Hui sagai, bani dulhan
Ho na paya dilon ka milan
Kho baithi mann ka santulan
Chhoda na jaye, moda na jaaye
Buss, dil harroz toda jaaye
She was a new bride making a new start
Without there ever being a meeting of hearts
The marriage, now an abandoned piece of art
Every tear she cried, a piece of her died
An expectation of love, now driven to suicide
random rants ruminations ramblings 
This is a great poem, Kunal 🙂
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Thanks!!!
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Wow awesome poetic words, Kunal.
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Thank you, Kamal!
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Too good too good K!
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Dheeraj, you’re a constant source of encouragement – many thanks!
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Entirely my pleasure ☺️
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Such a heart-breaking one, yet so beautifully done ! ❤
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure ! 🙂
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Afreen!
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Thanks, dad
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This is very heart moving, Kunal.
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Thanks, Syl! Appreciate your read & the comment! Have a lovely week!
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You’re welcome and you have a blessed week!
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So beautifully penned, but sad too!
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Thanks, kind sir
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Ah! this is so sad Kunal!
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It came about like that because I was trying to rhyme in Hindi. 😊 Thanks, C, look forward to seeing you more regularly again! Cheers!
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I’ll try, just been busy with work and life. Have a lovely day.😊
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👍 you, too!
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Oh this is deep and beautiful!
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Thank you, P! 🙏🏽
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You are very welcome.
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This is heart breaking yet beautifully done Kunal!
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Thanks, Radhika! Hope all well with you?
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Yes, doing good! Enjoying the rains and the pleasant weather 🙂
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👍
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It’s about every Indian bride. Though most don’t kill the selves , only life kills them slowly like poison. Oh this is so depressing , I hope it’s not about anybody.
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That’s true, Yas. No, not about anybody – I was limited by my Hindi vocab so it turned out like this ;).
Thanks, my friend, here’s to life & happiness!
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Yeah okay. It’s a very good piece , Kunal. You are an exceptional writer, I say this with utmost honesty. One of the very few whose work I enjoy.
Let’s drink a toast to happiness, to everyone’s happiness , that is. You take care.
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Many thanks, kind lady! Cheers! Have a good weekend, and God bless!
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Sad but well expressed
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Thanks, Bhavna! 🙏🏽
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My pleasure
Your words are pure n honest
You hv got a lovely blog
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Thanks again!
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