July 9, 2018July 14, 2018 by Kunal Thakore

Khushi ki Khudkushi / Love Died

Hindi, love gone bad, Poetry, ramblings
bride, cry, Love, Marriage, meeting of hearts, new start, suicide
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Hui sagai, bani dulhan

Ho na paya dilon ka milan

Kho baithi mann ka santulan

Chhoda na jaye, moda na jaaye

Buss, dil harroz toda jaaye

She was a new bride making a new start

Without there ever being a meeting of hearts

The marriage, now an abandoned piece of art

Every tear she cried, a piece of her died

An expectation of love, now driven to suicide

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Soundarya Sriram July 9, 2018 at 2:20 am

This is a great poem, Kunal 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore July 9, 2018 at 3:22 am
  
  Thanks!!!
  
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boundlessblessingsblog July 9, 2018 at 8:06 am

Wow awesome poetic words, Kunal.

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1. Kunal Thakore July 9, 2018 at 8:30 am
  
  Thank you, Kamal!
  
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extinct0703 July 9, 2018 at 8:18 am

Too good too good K!

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1. Kunal Thakore July 9, 2018 at 8:31 am
  
  Dheeraj, you’re a constant source of encouragement – many thanks!
  
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  1. extinct0703 July 9, 2018 at 9:20 am
    
    Entirely my pleasure ☺️
    
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themoonlightreverie July 9, 2018 at 8:39 am

Such a heart-breaking one, yet so beautifully done ! ❤

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1. Kunal Thakore July 9, 2018 at 8:40 am
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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  1. themoonlightreverie July 9, 2018 at 8:41 am
    
    My pleasure ! 🙂
    
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yagneshthakore July 9, 2018 at 11:56 am

Afreen!

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1. Kunal Thakore July 9, 2018 at 12:03 pm
  
  Thanks, dad
  
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syl65 July 9, 2018 at 2:45 pm

This is very heart moving, Kunal.

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1. Kunal Thakore July 9, 2018 at 2:55 pm
  
  Thanks, Syl! Appreciate your read & the comment! Have a lovely week!
  
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  1. syl65 July 9, 2018 at 3:25 pm
    
    You’re welcome and you have a blessed week!
    
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thereluctantpoet July 9, 2018 at 3:54 pm

So beautifully penned, but sad too!

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1. Kunal Thakore July 9, 2018 at 4:07 pm
  
  Thanks, kind sir
  
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chevvy8 July 9, 2018 at 5:34 pm

Ah! this is so sad Kunal!

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1. Kunal Thakore July 10, 2018 at 2:28 am
  
  It came about like that because I was trying to rhyme in Hindi. 😊 Thanks, C, look forward to seeing you more regularly again! Cheers!
  
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  1. chevvy8 July 10, 2018 at 4:09 am
    
    I’ll try, just been busy with work and life. Have a lovely day.😊
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore July 10, 2018 at 4:15 am
    
    👍 you, too!
    
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Infinite Living July 10, 2018 at 4:22 am

Oh this is deep and beautiful!

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1. Kunal Thakore July 10, 2018 at 5:31 am
  
  Thank you, P! 🙏🏽
  
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  1. Infinite Living July 11, 2018 at 12:21 am
    
    You are very welcome.
    
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radhikasreflection July 12, 2018 at 1:30 pm

This is heart breaking yet beautifully done Kunal!

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1. Kunal Thakore July 12, 2018 at 3:01 pm
  
  Thanks, Radhika! Hope all well with you?
  
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radhikasreflection July 12, 2018 at 3:18 pm

Yes, doing good! Enjoying the rains and the pleasant weather 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore July 12, 2018 at 3:36 pm
  
  👍
  
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yassy July 14, 2018 at 7:41 am

It’s about every Indian bride. Though most don’t kill the selves , only life kills them slowly like poison. Oh this is so depressing , I hope it’s not about anybody.

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1. Kunal Thakore July 14, 2018 at 7:47 am
  
  That’s true, Yas. No, not about anybody – I was limited by my Hindi vocab so it turned out like this ;).
  Thanks, my friend, here’s to life & happiness!
  
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  1. yassy July 14, 2018 at 9:58 am
    
    Yeah okay. It’s a very good piece , Kunal. You are an exceptional writer, I say this with utmost honesty. One of the very few whose work I enjoy.
    Let’s drink a toast to happiness, to everyone’s happiness , that is. You take care.
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore July 14, 2018 at 10:17 am
    
    Many thanks, kind lady! Cheers! Have a good weekend, and God bless!
    
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Bhavna Saurabh Sharma July 16, 2018 at 1:25 pm

Sad but well expressed

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1. Kunal Thakore July 16, 2018 at 1:44 pm
  
  Thanks, Bhavna! 🙏🏽
  
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  1. Bhavna Saurabh Sharma July 16, 2018 at 1:45 pm
    
    My pleasure
    Your words are pure n honest
    You hv got a lovely blog
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore July 16, 2018 at 6:20 pm
    
    Thanks again!
    
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