June 18, 2018May 26, 2018 by Kunal Thakore

Thank You, Father (Six lines, Two languages)

Gratitude, Hindi, Poetry, ruminations
assurance, fulfillment, His will, life, thanks, wants needs desires
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Khud ke jitne bhi the raas
Rakh aaya main Khuda ke paas
Jeeta raha, poora tha vishwaas
Zindagi ka badalta rukh
Bahut saare sukh, kai dukh
Aaj usne karva diya har ek ehsaas

All I ever wanted
I placed at His feet to be granted
He said, “go ahead and live,
Rest assured I will in due course give”
I’ve tried to live by His will
Today, I’ve had my fill

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radhikasreflection June 18, 2018 at 3:22 am

Beautiful lines of belief and gratitude Kunal!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2018 at 3:30 am
  
  Thank you, Radhika! Hope you’ve been well?
  
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radhikasreflection June 18, 2018 at 3:41 am

Yes all good Kunal. Missing your posts on WP!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2018 at 10:46 am
  
  And I’m missing your’s… on a family chhutti 😊
  
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  1. radhikasreflection June 18, 2018 at 11:09 am
    
    Enjoy 👍
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2018 at 11:12 am
    
    👍🙏🏽😊
    
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extinct0703 June 18, 2018 at 5:14 am

Simply superb K!

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1. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2018 at 10:47 am
  
  🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽 Dheeraj! You somehow manage to track down only all my attempts at Hindi! 😊
  
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  1. extinct0703 June 18, 2018 at 12:00 pm
    
    Yup! These days I am always short of time so whenever I check wp, I just go through the Hindi blogs. As such, only your Hindi write up need comments, English ones are always perfect, you being master of words, so from my end they are by default appreciated even if I don’t comment on them. ☺️☺️☺️
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2018 at 12:04 pm
    
    Hahaha, buss karo, you embarrass me! But, I really appreciate your kind words, D! Have a great evening!
    
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  3. extinct0703 June 19, 2018 at 8:32 am
    
    I always appreciate your work K! Thanks, you too have a great day ahead ☺️
    
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  4. Kunal Thakore June 19, 2018 at 1:22 pm
    
    👍🙏🏽😊
    
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  5. extinct0703 June 20, 2018 at 5:42 am
    
    ☺️☺️☺️
    
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Shruti Ohri June 18, 2018 at 6:10 am

This is beautiful!💙

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1. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2018 at 10:47 am
  
  Thanks, Shruti, for thinking so!
  
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yagneshthakore June 18, 2018 at 11:26 am

Stay blessed, Son

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1. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2018 at 11:59 am
  
  Thanks, dad
  
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themoonlightreverie June 18, 2018 at 2:37 pm

Beautiful lines ! 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore June 18, 2018 at 2:38 pm
  
  Thank you, appreciate it!
  
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yassy June 24, 2018 at 9:56 am

You are back with a bang with this verse of thanks. A beautiful way of giving back !

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1. Kunal Thakore June 24, 2018 at 10:16 am
  
  Thanks, Y!
  
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krishnapriya108 July 3, 2018 at 6:46 am

Beautiful — love the feel of hindi verse! And of course the translation is superb too. 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore July 3, 2018 at 6:47 am
  
  Thank you, dhanyavaad!
  
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Shantanu Baruah July 6, 2018 at 12:20 pm

Lovely

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1. Kunal Thakore July 7, 2018 at 2:38 am
  
  🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
  
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writteninthestars2016 July 26, 2018 at 3:25 am

My heart felt this. Having been blessed with the most beautiful father, his passing remains a gift I have to share … Thank you.

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1. Kunal Thakore July 26, 2018 at 4:45 am
  
  🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
  
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writteninthestars2016 July 26, 2018 at 3:26 am

My heart felt this. Having been blessed with the most beautiful father, his passing remains a gift I have to share … Thank you. This is special.

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1. Kunal Thakore July 26, 2018 at 4:55 am
  
  🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
  
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