May 14, 2018October 22, 2018 by Kunal Thakore

An Unjust Love (English + Hindi)

Hindi, love, Poetry, ramblings
breath of life, drink, eyes for you, GOd, line of sight, Love, no company, unjustness
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Meri aankhon mein sirf tum basey ho
Tumhari nazaron mein kya main dikhta bhi hoon

Tum meri jaan, meri praan ho
Meri tumhe pehchaan tak nahin

Kaisa yeh pyaar, yeh kaisa anyaay
Saath de na maikhaana na shivalaya

I have eyes only for you
Am I even in your line of sight?

Whereas you are my breath of life
Alas, you do not even perceive me

What kind of life, when there is unjustness in love
And neither drink nor God to give me company

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lamarrwenrich May 14, 2018 at 2:21 am

A hurting heart.. love is worth the risk..
beautifully written

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1. Kunal Thakore May 14, 2018 at 4:38 am
  
  Thanks!!!
  
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  1. lamarrwenrich May 14, 2018 at 5:49 am
    
    My pleasure 😊
    
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Nandita May 14, 2018 at 2:29 am

This is sad but beautiful, K!

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1. Kunal Thakore May 14, 2018 at 4:39 am
  
  Thanks, N! You any better?
  
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yagneshthakore May 14, 2018 at 4:37 am

You never cease to wow me. How dearly I wish your Gujarati was only half as good as either English or even Hindi.

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1. Kunal Thakore May 14, 2018 at 4:40 am
  
  Hahahhahaha, forget it! But thanks!
  
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boundlessblessingsblog May 14, 2018 at 4:54 am

Deep and profound words of a broken heart, Kunal and such an apt beautiful picture too.

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1. Kunal Thakore May 14, 2018 at 4:55 am
  
  Thank you, K!
  
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  1. boundlessblessingsblog May 14, 2018 at 4:57 am
    
    Welcome K.
    
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radhikasreflection May 14, 2018 at 6:32 am

Tute Dil se moti piroyee aapke shabdo ne….bahut khoob Kunal!

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1. Kunal Thakore May 14, 2018 at 6:40 am
  
  Shukriya, R! That’s a poetic reply! 🙂
  
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Shruti Ohri May 14, 2018 at 9:48 am

Hayee. Heartbreaking, yet so beautiful.❤

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1. Kunal Thakore May 14, 2018 at 1:27 pm
  
  Many thanks, Shruti! 🙏🏽
  
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impostorpawn May 14, 2018 at 1:20 pm

I have been there.
So beautiful.

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1. Kunal Thakore May 14, 2018 at 1:24 pm
  
  And? What was your cure?
  Thank you for coming by! 🙏🏽
  
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  1. impostorpawn May 14, 2018 at 7:57 pm
    
    who said i was cured? Let’s just say i came to terms with my terminal diagnosis. Some things can’t be cured only accepted.
    I really loved it.
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore May 15, 2018 at 1:03 am
    
    🙏🏽
    
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Thought for change May 14, 2018 at 4:17 pm

Lovely

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1. Kunal Thakore May 14, 2018 at 5:32 pm
  
  Thanks!
  
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extinct0703 May 17, 2018 at 11:05 am

You’re indeed master of words Kunal and I love it more when you do it in Hindi. One word – LAJAWAAB.

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1. Kunal Thakore May 17, 2018 at 11:08 am
  
  Hahahhaa, nahi yaar, itna mat kheencho! I do as much as I can within my constraints. Thanks, D, you well? Good to see you back!
  
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  1. extinct0703 May 17, 2018 at 11:13 am
    
    Na bilkul kheench nahi raha, sach bola hoon. You should try more in Hindi along with English. All well, thanks, you say K.
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore May 17, 2018 at 11:15 am
    
    All good, Bhagwan ki dua hai
    
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  3. extinct0703 May 17, 2018 at 1:46 pm
    
    Glad to hear it 🙂
    
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2. Kunal Thakore May 17, 2018 at 11:10 am
  
  Read the previous one if you’d like, Dheeraj… based on a Hindi song 🙂
  
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  1. extinct0703 May 17, 2018 at 11:14 am
    
    Sure will read it right away.
    
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SANA MAHIN May 18, 2018 at 9:49 am

Nice one…it’s so beautifully written

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1. Kunal Thakore May 18, 2018 at 10:59 am
  
  Thanks, Sana!
  
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Sohair May 19, 2018 at 1:32 am

So sad…keep writing..

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1. Kunal Thakore May 19, 2018 at 11:26 am
  
  Hahahahah, just a poem. Bu thank you, I intend to!
  
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  1. Sohair May 19, 2018 at 12:06 pm
    
    🙂
    
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aanshiblog May 22, 2018 at 5:56 am

This is amazing 💯 Loved itt❤️ Pyaarrr😊😊sath de na maikhaana na shivalaya😍

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1. Kunal Thakore May 22, 2018 at 5:59 am
  
  Thanks! Am glad it resonates!
  
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  1. aanshiblog May 22, 2018 at 6:01 am
    
    Welcomee❤️❤️
    
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Seema Tabassum May 31, 2018 at 3:47 am

atyant dukhmayi aapki kavita parantu sundar 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore May 31, 2018 at 4:05 am
  
  Dhanyavaad, meri dost!
  
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Mind Of The Writer June 2, 2018 at 11:00 am

This was so beautiful!

“What kind of life, when there is unjustness in love
And neither drink nor God to give me company” I felt this so much. You’re a very gifted writer:)

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1. Kunal Thakore June 2, 2018 at 11:15 am
  
  Thank you, thank you, thank you!
  
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krishnapriya108 June 3, 2018 at 7:26 am

bahut sundar — love the last line — na de maikhaana naa shivalaya. there is such depth in a broken heart. i hear you! 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore June 4, 2018 at 2:02 pm
  
  🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
  
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Dev-586 June 16, 2018 at 4:05 am

nice

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1. Kunal Thakore June 16, 2018 at 6:22 pm
  
  Thanks, Dev!
  
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vidur sahdev June 29, 2018 at 6:23 pm

Wow…I can feel it! 👍

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1. Kunal Thakore June 30, 2018 at 2:46 am
  
  🙏🏽
  
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kissewithsiya October 31, 2018 at 1:09 pm

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1. scorpio1987sazzy November 12, 2018 at 12:17 pm
  
  Beautiful words, love your art!
  
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  1. Kunal Thakore November 14, 2018 at 6:25 am
    
    🙏🏽
    
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scorpio1987sazzy November 12, 2018 at 12:17 pm

Beautiful words, love your art!

Please visit my page and review.

https://mesmots1987.wordpress.com/

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1. Kunal Thakore November 14, 2018 at 6:25 am
  
  👍
  
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