Meri aankhon mein sirf tum basey ho
Tumhari nazaron mein kya main dikhta bhi hoon
Tum meri jaan, meri praan ho
Meri tumhe pehchaan tak nahin
Kaisa yeh pyaar, yeh kaisa anyaay
Saath de na maikhaana na shivalaya
I have eyes only for you
Am I even in your line of sight?
Whereas you are my breath of life
Alas, you do not even perceive me
What kind of life, when there is unjustness in love
And neither drink nor God to give me company
A hurting heart.. love is worth the risk..
beautifully written
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Thanks!!!
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My pleasure 😊
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This is sad but beautiful, K!
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Thanks, N! You any better?
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You never cease to wow me. How dearly I wish your Gujarati was only half as good as either English or even Hindi.
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Hahahhahaha, forget it! But thanks!
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Deep and profound words of a broken heart, Kunal and such an apt beautiful picture too.
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Thank you, K!
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Welcome K.
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Tute Dil se moti piroyee aapke shabdo ne….bahut khoob Kunal!
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Shukriya, R! That’s a poetic reply! 🙂
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Hayee. Heartbreaking, yet so beautiful.❤
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Many thanks, Shruti! 🙏🏽
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I have been there.
So beautiful.
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And? What was your cure?
Thank you for coming by! 🙏🏽
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who said i was cured? Let’s just say i came to terms with my terminal diagnosis. Some things can’t be cured only accepted.
I really loved it.
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🙏🏽
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Lovely
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Thanks!
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You’re indeed master of words Kunal and I love it more when you do it in Hindi. One word – LAJAWAAB.
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Hahahhaa, nahi yaar, itna mat kheencho! I do as much as I can within my constraints. Thanks, D, you well? Good to see you back!
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Na bilkul kheench nahi raha, sach bola hoon. You should try more in Hindi along with English. All well, thanks, you say K.
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All good, Bhagwan ki dua hai
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Glad to hear it 🙂
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Read the previous one if you’d like, Dheeraj… based on a Hindi song 🙂
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Sure will read it right away.
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Nice one…it’s so beautifully written
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Thanks, Sana!
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So sad…keep writing..
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Hahahahah, just a poem. Bu thank you, I intend to!
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🙂
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This is amazing 💯 Loved itt❤️ Pyaarrr😊😊sath de na maikhaana na shivalaya😍
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Thanks! Am glad it resonates!
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Welcomee❤️❤️
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atyant dukhmayi aapki kavita parantu sundar 🙂
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Dhanyavaad, meri dost!
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This was so beautiful!
“What kind of life, when there is unjustness in love
And neither drink nor God to give me company” I felt this so much. You’re a very gifted writer:)
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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bahut sundar — love the last line — na de maikhaana naa shivalaya. there is such depth in a broken heart. i hear you! 🙂
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🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
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nice
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Thanks, Dev!
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Wow…I can feel it! 👍
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