January 8, 2018January 1, 2018 by Kunal Thakore Hindi Haiku (an experiment) easy reading, Hindi, Humor, Poetry, ramblings flowers, haiku, Love, mistake 52 Comments Ki badi bhool Ke pyaar usko kiya kabool Asweekar kiye phool Sent floral admission Of my love for her A mistake ’twas Share this:TwitterFacebookPinterestTumblrLike Loading... Related
That’s a rather brave attempt! Well done! Although I speak great Hindi, I’d be scared to try something like this… Metrics of any kind scare me too much! 🙂 LikeLiked by 3 people Reply
Hahahaha, thanks! Had to keep the execution simple to go with my basic Hindi 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Hey, thanks! You speak the language? 😳 or you just read it aloud & it seems so? I was just fooling around when this happened. Thanks again, bud! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Hahaha, thank you! But believe me, my Hindi isn’t half as good as it should be, and forget about the Gujju completely!! 😉 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Huyi badi bhool Pyar usne na kiya kabool Asweekar kiye phool Hi Kunal! Ek aur variant aapke Haiku ka agar ijazzat ho to. Regards Dhiraj LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Of course, Dheeraj! Many thanks! Lekin bottomline toh badli nahin… phool waapis hi kiye usne 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
That’s a rather brave attempt! Well done! Although I speak great Hindi, I’d be scared to try something like this… Metrics of any kind scare me too much! 🙂
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Haha, thanks! Be bindaas, y aar
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Some idea, this. Great.
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Thanks!
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A cute one !
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Thanks!
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Hahaha nice and cute one Kunal.
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Thanks, Kamal 🙂
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Welcome Kunal.
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What an idea sir ji 😉👍
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Hahahaha, thanks! Had to keep the execution simple to go with my basic Hindi 🙂
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Interesting experiment.
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Thanks, Smitha!
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Superb! 😎🥀
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🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
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Wow, well done Kunal!
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Thanks, Isha!
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I don’t speak Hindi and I love that you chose to experiment!
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Thanks, Arati 🙏🏽
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The Hindi sounds more musical K. I like it.
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Hey, thanks! You speak the language? 😳 or you just read it aloud & it seems so? I was just fooling around when this happened. Thanks again, bud!
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Just reading it aloud, but it’s nice to have the translation.
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👍😊
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Fascinated by haikus although I’ve never written one.
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Thank you! Only my second ever! Try it, it’s not too difficult!
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Maybe I will…
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Look forward… give me a heads up
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Live dangerously – why not? hahaha!
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Well, we’re all fools when it come to love, isn’t it? Thank you, C!
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Yes we are though my mantra for 2018 is “no regrets” 🙂
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Here’s to that! 🙌
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Most delightful way for me to brush up on my Hindi!
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Hahaha, thank you! But believe me, my Hindi isn’t half as good as it should be, and forget about the Gujju completely!! 😉
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lol !
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Huyi badi bhool
Pyar usne na kiya kabool
Asweekar kiye phool
Hi Kunal!
Ek aur variant aapke Haiku ka agar ijazzat ho to.
Regards
Dhiraj
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Of course, Dheeraj! Many thanks! Lekin bottomline toh badli nahin… phool waapis hi kiye usne 🙂
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Hehehe sahi hai 😂
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Should’ve sent chocolates 😛
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Hahahahhahahaha! Best comment so far!!
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😀
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So sorry it did not work out. 😦 Great haiku, though. 🙂
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Haha, thanks!!!
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very sincere:)
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Thank you! 🙂
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Beautifully penned..
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Dhanyavaad/shukriya
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I am new here. Plz check out my blog.
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Sure, I will!
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Keep writing
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❤️❤️❤️
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🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽, Varun!
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