January 8, 2018January 1, 2018 by Kunal Thakore

Hindi Haiku (an experiment)

easy reading, Hindi, Humor, Poetry, ramblings
flowers, haiku, Love, mistake
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Ki badi bhool
Ke pyaar usko kiya kabool
Asweekar kiye phool

Sent floral admission
Of my love for her
A mistake ’twas

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Aishwarya January 8, 2018 at 3:57 am

That’s a rather brave attempt! Well done! Although I speak great Hindi, I’d be scared to try something like this… Metrics of any kind scare me too much! 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore January 8, 2018 at 3:59 am
  
  Haha, thanks! Be bindaas, y aar
  
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yagneshthakore January 8, 2018 at 4:21 am

Some idea, this. Great.

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1. Kunal Thakore January 8, 2018 at 5:54 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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Lifeisbeautiful January 8, 2018 at 4:52 am

A cute one !

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1. Kunal Thakore January 8, 2018 at 5:54 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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boundlessblessingsblog January 8, 2018 at 6:23 am

Hahaha nice and cute one Kunal.

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1. Kunal Thakore January 8, 2018 at 6:35 am
  
  Thanks, Kamal 🙂
  
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  1. boundlessblessingsblog January 8, 2018 at 8:30 am
    
    Welcome Kunal.
    
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radhikasreflection January 8, 2018 at 7:38 am

What an idea sir ji 😉👍

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1. Kunal Thakore January 8, 2018 at 7:48 am
  
  Hahahaha, thanks! Had to keep the execution simple to go with my basic Hindi 🙂
  
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Smitha V January 8, 2018 at 9:43 am

Interesting experiment.

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1. Kunal Thakore January 8, 2018 at 10:14 am
  
  Thanks, Smitha!
  
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dornahainds January 8, 2018 at 5:59 pm

Superb! 😎🥀

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1. Kunal Thakore January 8, 2018 at 6:22 pm
  
  🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
  
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Isha Garg January 10, 2018 at 11:21 am

Wow, well done Kunal!

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1. Kunal Thakore January 10, 2018 at 11:22 am
  
  Thanks, Isha!
  
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Arati January 11, 2018 at 4:30 am

I don’t speak Hindi and I love that you chose to experiment!

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1. Kunal Thakore January 11, 2018 at 5:34 am
  
  Thanks, Arati 🙏🏽
  
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poison21 January 14, 2018 at 2:17 am

The Hindi sounds more musical K. I like it.

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1. Kunal Thakore January 14, 2018 at 3:14 am
  
  Hey, thanks! You speak the language? 😳 or you just read it aloud & it seems so? I was just fooling around when this happened. Thanks again, bud!
  
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  1. poison21 January 14, 2018 at 5:12 am
    
    Just reading it aloud, but it’s nice to have the translation.
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore January 14, 2018 at 6:00 am
    
    👍😊
    
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poison21 January 14, 2018 at 2:18 am

Fascinated by haikus although I’ve never written one.

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1. Kunal Thakore January 14, 2018 at 3:15 am
  
  Thank you! Only my second ever! Try it, it’s not too difficult!
  
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  1. poison21 January 14, 2018 at 5:14 am
    
    Maybe I will…
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore January 14, 2018 at 6:01 am
    
    Look forward… give me a heads up
    
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chevvy8 January 14, 2018 at 2:50 am

Live dangerously – why not? hahaha!

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1. Kunal Thakore January 14, 2018 at 3:16 am
  
  Well, we’re all fools when it come to love, isn’t it? Thank you, C!
  
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  1. chevvy8 January 14, 2018 at 3:17 am
    
    Yes we are though my mantra for 2018 is “no regrets” 🙂
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore January 14, 2018 at 3:23 am
    
    Here’s to that! 🙌
    
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annika January 14, 2018 at 1:01 pm

Most delightful way for me to brush up on my Hindi!

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1. Kunal Thakore January 14, 2018 at 1:20 pm
  
  Hahaha, thank you! But believe me, my Hindi isn’t half as good as it should be, and forget about the Gujju completely!! 😉
  
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  1. annika January 14, 2018 at 1:50 pm
    
    lol !
    
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extinct0703 January 16, 2018 at 6:08 am

Huyi badi bhool
Pyar usne na kiya kabool
Asweekar kiye phool

Hi Kunal!
Ek aur variant aapke Haiku ka agar ijazzat ho to.
Regards
Dhiraj

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1. Kunal Thakore January 16, 2018 at 6:39 am
  
  Of course, Dheeraj! Many thanks! Lekin bottomline toh badli nahin… phool waapis hi kiye usne 🙂
  
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  1. extinct0703 January 16, 2018 at 11:08 am
    
    Hehehe sahi hai 😂
    
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Hammad Rais January 19, 2018 at 6:29 am

Should’ve sent chocolates 😛

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1. Kunal Thakore January 19, 2018 at 6:32 am
  
  Hahahahhahahaha! Best comment so far!!
  
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  1. Hammad Rais January 19, 2018 at 7:02 am
    
    😀
    
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LuAnne Holder January 22, 2018 at 5:55 pm

So sorry it did not work out. 😦 Great haiku, though. 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore January 23, 2018 at 1:25 am
  
  Haha, thanks!!!
  
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The Thrifty Campers February 4, 2018 at 8:07 pm

very sincere:)

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1. Kunal Thakore February 5, 2018 at 6:29 am
  
  Thank you! 🙂
  
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Andaaz e Kalam February 23, 2018 at 7:13 am

Beautifully penned..

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1. Kunal Thakore February 23, 2018 at 7:15 am
  
  Dhanyavaad/shukriya
  
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Andaaz e Kalam February 23, 2018 at 7:14 am

I am new here. Plz check out my blog.

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1. Kunal Thakore February 23, 2018 at 7:16 am
  
  Sure, I will!
  
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rupaiyapaisa April 25, 2018 at 5:59 pm

Keep writing

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varun upasani April 28, 2018 at 7:22 pm

❤️❤️❤️

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1. Kunal Thakore April 29, 2018 at 3:22 am
  
  🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽, Varun!
  
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Kunal Thakore October 12, 2019 at 4:16 pm

Reblogged this on random rants ruminations ramblings.

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