Finely woven fibres
Growing in dark corners
Of the mind
Delicately intricate strands
That encircle, entangle and entrap
Thoughts & memories
It’s true, they’re stronger than steel
Find me a broom, a brush
To sweep them clean
And set free the heart again
Whisking away the web of the past
For hopes of the future
Lovely, to say the least.
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Thanks, dad
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So very true, those strands are stronger than steel. And a great message in your poem, K! I’m going to make this my mantra for now.
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What, removing the “jaalas” from the head?
😉
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Abey, these jaalas are the toughest!
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Yeah, I know…get a strong jhaadu!
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Getting into my ‘bai’ avatar..
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🙂 It’s almost time for Diwali cleaning anyways
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Haan yaar
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Nice poem–like finely woven (spider) silk. 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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This was really wonderful! I like shorter poems like this. Enjoyed the picture that went along with it too. http://Www.brilliantviewpoint.com
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Thanks very much!
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I haven’t read a poem in a long time. Loved this and Also, the picture goes perfectly well with the short poem
http://twenty7bymichelle.com/road-trippin-jutland-denmark/
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Oh wow, thanks, Michelle!
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sir Yagnesh, your son writes awesome. This verse is one of your best Kunal. Favoriting it a million times.
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Hahahahah, thank you! I’ll tell him – I doubt he will re-visit this post 🙂
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Yeah , you better tell him. So cool your dad , reading his son’s work. You lucky bugger!
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You know he’s also started his own blog, ya?
http://www.belatedbloomer.wordpress.com
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I will follow him !!
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Do that! And many thanks, in advance!
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Your welcome welcome hahahahaha
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Lol. Not getting him.
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HuH? Here’s a link –
https://belatedbloomer.wordpress.com
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Okay. Followed. Thanks sorry for eating your head
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Hey check what you gave me
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You sure are a lucky bugger! Look who has revisited your site.
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Hahahahahah! I am!
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[…] Source: Cobwebs & Brushes […]
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It’s so lovely!! Poem with beautiful meaning giving and hope have interpreted correctly the importance of cleaning heart and inside first!! Early morning reading the beautiful post made my day!!
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Oh, you make it sound so easy to do! Inspiring.
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Spring cleaning is hard work, whether of the house or of the mind, Sonya!
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Awesome!!
Please do checkout my blog
Feel free to like, comment and follow.Namaste.
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Thanks! And I will… cheers!
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Splendid, Kunal. Reminded me of Emily Dickinson…
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Thanks, Em!
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A wonderful write, Kunal. Such are the depths of the human mind, some corners always remain beyond, the reach of any broom.
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Thank you, Vidur! You understand right… 🙂
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No more climbing up the wall, I say 🙂
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😊👍
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Reblogged this on From 1 Blogger 2 Another.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome!
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