March 20, 2017October 19, 2018 by Kunal Thakore

ASYMMETRY

metaphor, Poetry, ramblings
asymmetry, circle, disturbed, equilibrium, fluid, odds, rearranged, seamless, skewed, triangle, warped
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Two well-defined points
A simple line connecting them
Joining them together
Forming the radius
To a circle
360 degrees of life
Fluid, seamless
Organised around the central focus

Disturbed equilibrium
Rearranged geometry
And a smooth arc
Became a scalene triangle
Skewed and biased
Warped and unstable
Jagged edges
At odds with each other

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A Humble Shadow March 20, 2017 at 1:22 am

Those words so wonderfully take the subject in the right way, great write and stellar material

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1. Kunal Thakore March 20, 2017 at 3:07 am
  
  Thank you! 🙏🏽
  
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aseemdhru March 20, 2017 at 1:40 am

Geometry has always been used to make art beautiful. For the first time i see its usage to make poetry beautiful. Wow 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore March 20, 2017 at 3:08 am
  
  Thanks so much, Aseem, my friend
  
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poemsinacoffer March 20, 2017 at 4:42 am

Wonderful Kunal…what imagination ! You took me back to the Maths classes during school…haha !!

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1. Kunal Thakore March 20, 2017 at 5:09 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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chevvy8 March 20, 2017 at 4:48 am

A clever and wonderful metaphor to illustrate how things can be displaced or become out of sync. Have a lovely day Kunal!

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1. Kunal Thakore March 20, 2017 at 5:09 am
  
  Thanks, Chevvy & to you, too!
  
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Gursimran Kaur March 20, 2017 at 10:58 am

Loved the way you express.

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1. Kunal Thakore March 20, 2017 at 11:08 am
  
  Thanks! 🙂
  
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Sonya Kassam March 20, 2017 at 1:56 pm

I love what you did here 🙂 I also enjoy writing poetry around mathematics and science, wish I had paid more attention in school.

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1. Kunal Thakore March 20, 2017 at 2:10 pm
  
  😊
  Thank you, Sonya!
  
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Joan March 20, 2017 at 9:54 pm

Elegant indeed…

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1. Kunal Thakore March 21, 2017 at 1:12 am
  
  Thanks, Joan
  
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dornahainds March 20, 2017 at 10:55 pm

Phenomenal! 😎😇

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1. Kunal Thakore March 21, 2017 at 1:12 am
  
  Oh wow, thanks!
  
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Mahalakshmi Ramasubramanian March 22, 2017 at 3:00 pm

Woah!! Beautifully expressed!!

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1. Kunal Thakore March 22, 2017 at 3:53 pm
  
  Thanks, Mahalakshmi! Appreciate the visit & the comment 🙂
  
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yagneshthakore March 23, 2017 at 4:49 am

From where do you get such brilliantl ideas?

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1. Kunal Thakore March 23, 2017 at 5:14 am
  
  Genes???😁
  
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  1. yagneshthakore March 23, 2017 at 8:08 am
    
    And I thought about borrowing some from you. HaHa.
    
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Jambo Stewart March 23, 2017 at 10:17 am

Your geometric poetry is awesome. Mixing art with mathematics is a great way to increase learning potential, by improving memory. There can be no science without art.

Check out The Law of Four challenge. Not quite the same but somewhat geometrical. It’s about carefully constructed poetry using a strict word count.

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1. Kunal Thakore March 23, 2017 at 10:48 am
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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orangeorchards April 22, 2017 at 6:28 am

Mathematics and poetry. An intriguing combination. Superb.

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1. Kunal Thakore April 22, 2017 at 6:51 am
  
  Thanks again
  
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  1. orangeorchards April 22, 2017 at 8:22 am
    
    Pleasure 🐼
    
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