The one time that my brush has composed the words to a piece of free verse.
Pure, pristine innocence.
Encircled.
And soon sucked into a stained, spiraling vortex.
Of avarice and temptation. Lust. Greed. Gluttony.
Jealousy. Anger. Doubt. Anxiety. Negativity.
Impatience. Sloth. Conceit. Fear. Withdrawal. Denial. Falsehoods.
Ephemeral pursuits. Vice.
The preponderance of the I.
A myriad inveigling hues of the horned sorcerer.
A relentless whorl.
Till the very end.
And then, a reversal, a revertal, a return to the origin.
Ahh, the circles of hell. I find that painting cold and austere.
I know you’re intelligent enough to see the compliment in my words.
Peace and love to your u, my friend.
~J
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Thank you!
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That indeed paints a picture with the fine art of words
My congrats on a real class write
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Thank you so very much!
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The words are as beautiful as the colors, kudos
ps: i just wanted to put a dart in the middle when i laid my eyes upon it.
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Thanks, Akhiz bhai
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Words nearly fail me. . . Stunning! Masterfully crafted ~ both vortex and verse!
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You just made my day! Thanks tons!
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You’re certainly welcome!
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Fabulous.
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Thanks😊
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You are most welcome. 🙂
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Oh, this is such a beautiful piece! I love it! ♥
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Thanks!
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Simply awesome. Really beautiful.
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Thanks ❤️
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Wow ! Great versatility from literary to culinary to artistic heights just great. The painting instantly makes an impact.The brilliant colours their symbolism and the ultimate use of white speaks volumes.As for the poetic expression it enhances the beauty of the visual impact.
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It really feels nice to read this comment early in the morning, you’ve put a big smile on my face. Thanks! 😄
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Honest words. You are most welcome.😊😊
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Thanks again & a big hug 😊
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Such strong words. For me your picture is nice but your words take it to the next level.
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Thank you so much!
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Love love love love love the piece and the metaphor 🙂 So gifted ! Bless you 🙂
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Buss karo, baba! Don’t want panvati 😜! Thanks!!!
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HAHAHAH …panvati …I love how you use these words ..you sound like my family !!
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Say quick, do you have a birthmark on your right forearm? Or do you wear a Bhagwaan ka amulet? Then perhaps, a la Bollywood we could be long lost siblings discovered thru WP! 😝
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Bhawgan ka scapular around neck and birthmark on left thigh …. chalega ? But we both are haurats ..see one semblance !
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Guilty as charged 😁
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🙂
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love this post,both painting and words
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Thank you, Seema 😊
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my pleasure 🙂
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You have a very beautiful website. I look forward to coming back and reading more. Please stop by mine and if you like, follow back.
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Thank you! And I sure will!
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Your post is as beautiful as the colours in your picture. So lovely.👌👌👌👌
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You’re kind… Thanks!
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Well done
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Thanks!
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My pleasure
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[…] Writing, Through A Brush […]
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“And then, a reversal, a revertal, a return to the origin.” Would that be Brahmin? Again, wonderful painting! Love it!
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To the nothingness which is infinite… yes, Brahmana! Um, sorry, but it’s Brahmana you mean (Brahmin is the ‘varna’ or ‘caste’). Many thanks, really appreciate your taking the trouble to visit all 3!
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You are most certainly welcome, and thank you for the correction! Many blessings!
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Blessings & His grace back at you, Jonathan! Thank you!
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Absolutely beautiful – the colours and the words — from unity to duality and then back home again! How did you come up with this – amazing! 🙂
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All His grace, my friend! Many thanks!
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