Meri toh hai tu ek manzil
Tera dil main kar lu haasil
Kaash yeh mujhe jaaye mil
Kya main hoon kaabil
My heart won’t rest till
My lifelong quest gets its fill
Make it thy will
So this racing heart can stand still
The first stanza is about the one desire, with a hope that her heart can be won
and questioning the ability to do so… with a little help again from Nandita.
I’m not translating this one because I wrote it wanting words in both languages
ending in ‘il’ – I’m sure that with a little help from the image, you’ll all get it!
Image from Pinterest via Google.
I like the ending -il . Well done , K:)
Desires !
And even when her heart be won
and two entwine to become one
will the heart stop racing for more?
his roving heart can ne’er be sure.
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Waah, waah! Thanks, Pri!
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Shukriya , K 🙂
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🙂
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Ah! you’re a dreamer for sure – aint nothing wrong with that! 😀
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Hahaha, thanks, Chev!
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माशा-अल्लाह बहुत ख़ूब
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Thank you! 😊
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If you put a smiling baby face sun in place of the heart shaped cloud, you have the Telletubbies backdrop. LOL! Seriously, thank you for making Hindi accessible. I can appreciate the music of your poem, but your translation and interweaving of English gives it depth and brings it to life.
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Thank you, appreciate you stopping by! Oh, and here’s a smiley face for you – 😊
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this is great! ❤
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Thanks, Rose!
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thank youuuuu! ❤
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This is pretty cool, the contrast of both languages went really well with each other to convey the feeling ! 🙂
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Thanks, Zee! Glad you liked it!
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A simple desire, brilliantly expressed.
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Many thanks, Hammad!
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Amazing.. v.well done
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Thanks, Anju 😊
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Awesome
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Thanks! 👍
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http://Www.mindswat.com
Diffrent knowledge in this blog in hindi
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This awesome movie made me write about 1 of my life inciddents i had watched this movie more than 5 times just to complete my article just to Feel something twice.. 😦
pleace have a look once hope so you will like it… Kaabil
https://soulspeaksbettersite.wordpress.com/2017/02/04/kaabil-a-short-story/
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