My ode, my paean to a supposedly heartless city which has captured mine from Day 1…
Mythical, legendary, Hollywoodian, all too real
A microcosm of America, the world, life itself, with all its disparities
A city on steroids which ensnares you, eats you alive & spits you out
A Mecca with a brazen, in-your-face attitude
A whore of an island which usurps the limelight
And four step-sisterly buroughs that barely matter to the outsider
Where chaos 24×7, pulsating energy, adrenaline rush
Course, fast-paced, like blood jackhammering through veins
Where ambition and achievement soar above
And illusionary towers shield the reality of the sky
The bleeding edge, where the future is born, where the sharpest minds congregate
From the depths and dankness of the subway to heavenly heights
The River, the Lady, the Bridge, the Tunnel, Central Park, Broadway, Times Square, the Village
Hurrying, harried pavements, a testimony to dreams and desperation
The buzz, the vibe, the X factor, sensual attractions
The noise, the smells, the dirt, bodily functions and secretions
The streets and avenues, gaudy and garish, insomnia inducing glam, glitz
With immigrants, tourists, moths drawn to an incomparable flame
A city, which epitomizes an inviting “fuck me”
A city, which epitomizes a belligerent, confrontational “fuck you”
New York. Take a deep breath in
New York. You can never let it out
the two lines before the last two lines, LOL!
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Oh but it’s true!
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…and it’s just one Megabus trip away. Inviting!
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How lucky is that!
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Love it!
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Thanks so much!
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My pleasure
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An ode was the best way to do this – she is a city with attitude who befuddles your brain and steals your heart but I’ve heard that she can leave you heartbroken because people are always on the move to and from whence they came.
I like your use of the word jackhammering – it somehow epitomises that never-ending – persistent auditory attack. Not sure I heard the incessant sound of the whistling down and hoots of the Taxi cabs but this poem is quite a sensory feast. I take a bow to the poet 😀
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Thanks, C! There tonight, as excited as a kid in a candy store, been that way 30 odd years! ❤️
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Well have fun for all of us.My visit was about 8 years ago but feels like yesterday. I remember standing next to Danny Devito on the pavement in 5th Ave and feeling very tall 😀 I think you got the description down pat!!
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Will, undoubtedly! Thanks, take care!
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✨✨✨
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FABULOUS capture of the intensity
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👍
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and off the charts energy of this place. Brilliant!
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Thanks, L! Love the city! Absolutely love it!
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Oh fantastic! I love every line, every word, especially the “fuck me, fuck you” part. So so true!! How I would have loved to have met you when I was there. 🙂 I need to add another poem to my NY poem collection soon. 😉 Perfection!
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Thanks, Em! Was pretty sure it would resonate! 😉
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Great Hop On but no hop offs tour of the Big Apple. Took a mental tour of the city as your choice of words brought it alive. Have fun there 🙂
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Thanks, Aseem! Nice way of putting it!
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New York. Nandita Yata. You ❤ NY!! 😉
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Yes, ma’am, I sure do!
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Lovely dissection NY , the mosaic of life n places …oops , people too ! Great read 😃
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Thanks, pal!
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The big apple described with all its vigour and verve…….excellent piece Sir……to my most favourite city in the world. Cheers.
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Thanks, Asif!
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It’s like you sucked out the city’s soul and smeared it on a page. Unabashed, unapologetic quite like NY, a roller -coaster of a post!
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Lol, NY has that effect on people! Thanks, Tanya 😊
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A fantastic tribute to such a lively, enthralling being. 🌹
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Thanks, Dorna!
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Omg. Awesome.
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dhanyavaad!
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Koi baat naahee
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Going to tweet
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oh, wow! muchas gracias!
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Did tweet.
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Sweet of you, Y!
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Welcome K!
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Epic write. Will read it again.
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🙂
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You can take the boy out of the city…
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😊👍🙏🏽
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Oh yeah, I remember now, you’re a New Yorker!
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Wow, off the charts right on!
“A city on steroids which ensnares you, eats you alive & spits you out…” If you are lucky the city will spit you out!
Amazing how you captured the essence and all the facets of this city, down to the “…And four step-sisterly buroughs that barely matter to the outsider…”
The rhythm of the poem is New York, in some way relentless! I could feel the pulse of the city. I haven’t been there in a few years, thanks for the visit.
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Thanks, Arati, from an unapologetic lover of that city, it’s many warts & all! Have the good fortune of revisiting &hence the repost! 😊
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Wow brilliant!
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Thanks, Sonya! Eid Mubarak!
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Aah….and isn’t that life!
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Tx! Never ceases to amaze & enthrall me
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