Wick burning silently.
See in the flame
My love for you.
In the flickering,
My hesitation.
Feel the warmth.
Smell the sweet aroma.
In the wisp of smoke rising,
See my longing.
And in the wax melting,
My hope waning.
Consuming me, in slow burn.
You kindled it.
Come, extinguish it.
Or carry me with you.
I promise to light your life.
Very romantic!
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Tis the season…
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Derrick! Have a lovely weekend!
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i luved your thought process…. But i strangely feel the proportion of melancholy to the romance is a bit off….
But wen you luk at de same frm a lil different perspective its all the more beautiful…
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It’s like this – I’m burning at both ends, so yes, I did want to strike a balance. Maybe I’m always more pessimistic and that’s coming through!?!
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Probably…
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🙂
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keep blogging 🙂
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In the flickering my hesitation…superb
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🙂 Thanks, as always, for your encouragement
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Uljhan badi hai..
Batau kya???
Ek diya salai ke sath kai aur jal padi..
Wo jali thi bhadhak ke..
Bujha du kya ??
Aise hi kuch rishte ban pade hai..
Mita du kya??
Jo na mitaya,toh har waqt khalega..
Jo bujha diya toh dhuaa chubega
P.S. I hope you understand Hindi 🙂
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Of course I do, baba! National language! Thanks for reading & commenting!
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Loved it! Very well written. I particularly liked the personification of the candle. (If i’ve understood it correctly.) 🙂
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Thank you!
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Beautifully penned, very emotive 🙂
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Thank you!
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You surprise with your poetry.
Beautiful
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Aaah, what can I say…a big thank you!
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Ravishing🌹
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Thank you!
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You kindled it.
Come, extinguish it.
Or carry me with you.
I promise to light your life……… ❤ ❤ ❤ took my heart away!
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Oh yes! We poets burn…it’s our lot!
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could not have agreed more…
If Love is a flame then a poet in love
is like the silent candle that burns below!
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My, my – don’t think I’ve seen this before and I didn’t plagiarise either. How cool is that for like minds. Hope you don’t mind me treasure hunting:-)
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Hahaha, thank you, Chevvy! Always a pleasure to have like minded folks drop in!
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Well thank you for warm hospitality. I liked your poem very much! Enjoy your weekend!
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Poetic excellence
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Thank you, Ax
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Reblogged this on random rants ruminations ramblings.
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Tender Romance. Truly awesome
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🙏🏽
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