December 14, 2015May 6, 2016 by Kunal Thakore

A SILENT REVELATION

Words.
In my heart.
In my head.
On my mind.
Imprinted in memory.
Etched on my brain.

Words.
Formed. Practised. Repeated.
Within my pen.
Put down on paper.
At the tip of my tongue.
Hidden. Unspoken.

Lest I reveal the secret
I have held for far too long.

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chevvy8 December 14, 2015 at 8:56 am

Simply beautiful 🙂

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1. Kunal Thakore December 14, 2015 at 9:12 am
  
  Thanks very much!
  
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  1. chevvy8 December 14, 2015 at 9:22 am
    
    My pleasure. Thank you specially for your support. I’m taking a holiday break and look forward to catching up in the new year. Best wishes for the holidays and new year. Chevvy
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore December 14, 2015 at 9:29 am
    
    To you and family, too! Hope it’s a wonderful Xmas and best for the New Year!
    
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Lola December 14, 2015 at 11:42 am

Lyrical, yet solid and grounded. Strong. Beautiful piece.

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1. Kunal Thakore December 14, 2015 at 11:51 am
  
  Thank you, Lola! Appreciate it!
  
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syl65 December 14, 2015 at 4:07 pm

This is amazing, Kunal!

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1. Kunal Thakore December 14, 2015 at 4:09 pm
  
  Thank you, Syl, it’s very nice of you to say that!
  
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  1. syl65 December 14, 2015 at 4:11 pm
    
    You’re welcome, my friend and I appreciate your poem a lot!
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore December 14, 2015 at 4:14 pm
    
    Am glad you do! I enjoy a lot of your work, too!
    
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  3. syl65 December 14, 2015 at 4:38 pm
    
    Thank you!
    
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Akhiz December 18, 2015 at 3:42 pm

i m having similar kind of relation with words these past months… excellently written, you are so good with words.

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1. Kunal Thakore December 18, 2015 at 3:45 pm
  
  Shukriya, janaab! Appreciate your compliments and grateful to Him for this gift. How’s the doggie?
  
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  1. Akhiz December 18, 2015 at 4:33 pm
    
    Balki is fine, growing in size and naughtiness
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore December 18, 2015 at 4:46 pm
    
    👍
    
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2. Kunal Thakore December 18, 2015 at 3:47 pm
  
  This is about my feelings for a girl. I’m dying to tell her, but my mouth can’t form the words, they stay at the tip of my tongue…
  
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  1. Akhiz December 18, 2015 at 4:31 pm
    
    for me it was just for words any words to anyone went through a writers block … hope you get them soon what you wanna say 🙂
    
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  2. Kunal Thakore December 18, 2015 at 4:46 pm
    
    😊
    
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sheldonk2014 December 21, 2015 at 1:06 am

You find the courage when the time is rite
As always Sheldon

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1. Kunal Thakore December 21, 2015 at 3:05 am
  
  😊
  
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Sabiscuit December 26, 2015 at 9:23 am

The energy moving through this poem was fantastic. I enjoyed feeling my way through it. You have a way with words, embodying emotions through strong phrasing. Loved it. xo

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1. Kunal Thakore December 26, 2015 at 10:11 am
  
  Thank you! God bless!
  
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