Swallows soaring in cerulean skies
Butterflies flitting hither thither
Glorious, invigorating summer sun
Christmases white with carpets of snow
The ensconsing warmth of the hearth
Snowflakes wafting slowly down
Majestic thunderstorms, multihued arcs
The scent of freshly washed mud
The flowering of spring’s first bud
A baby’s smile, a dog’s happy bark
Verdant, undulating greens
The simplest of pleasures the most sublime
Incense infused evenings
Pages of poetic verse, melancholy ballads
Sheets of satin, a down pillow
Turbulent ocean crossings
A dozen wondrous destinations
Enchantment, delight alleviating the incompleteness
Rose petals and lustrous pearls
A sonorous harp, wine and viand
Courting the senses, tempting suppressed desire
Plastic smiles and
suitors with invitations to dance
Empty merriment, strangers with words of mindless wisdom
Exiting offstage when the day is done
Peaks of pleasure, the abyss of pain
Dreams, disappointments, despondency
Time measured in an instant and an age
This I have seen, through this I have been
All this I have enjoyed, embraced with enthusiasm
Experienced, endured with equanimity
And yet more of each I still expect
As I wait for Him
To be here by my side
You write well.
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Thank you! I appreciate your taking taking the time to read and react.
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You’re welcome Hare Krishna
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Hare Krishna!
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My favourite… Recognition of his grace
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Thank you! Appreciate your taking the time & trouble to read & react.
Yes, always grateful for the gifts He gives us!
Have a wonderful day, my friend!
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I was wondering if it was a piece of sacred verse or whether it came from hour true self
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Nope, MMM, my work. Like I was telling Krysiakorsak, sometimes it’s almost like autowriting. Perhaps, as you mentioned, by His grace? Thanks, again! Cheers!
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Perhaps there was no you writing…
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Hmmm, perhaps… Again, grateful for what I’ve got and thanks to you for your comments. Have a wonderful day!
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Did you write this? It is truly truly stunning…so so beautifully written. I really love all the imagery pooled together here…you write so so well Kunal! Thank you for sharing this precious piece. You should repost this again…it should not be kept hidden under a bushel…take care my friend.
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You flatter me, Krys! Sometimes, things just take over and the hand writes pretty much of its own accord…
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No flattery, just the truth! And the hand being guided by the Self/ Atman…..Sheer wonder. Must go…a new day beckons, my friend. Thank you.
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Have good one, Krys! All the best!
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AMAZING!
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Dhanyavaad & shukriya 🙂
Sometimes one is not in control of what the hand writes, it just comes forth!
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Very true. Writing that touches the vety depth of our being generally comes from the source or fountain of creativity and we ourselves are surprised as to what manifests.
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Absolutely true. Thanks, once again!
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Beautiful poem ! Cheers.
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Thank you!
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On my goodness! this is so very beautiful, thank you for reading my poem and for sending me this link, I am looking forward to reading much more of your work, truly wonderful!!! I love this line especially “The simplest of pleasures the most sublime” Namaste……Michelle
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Thanks, Michelle! Glad you liked it…
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Reblogged this on random rants ruminations ramblings and commented:
Love lies in waiting…..
(Radha was madly in love with Lord Krishna, for those who don’t know Hindu mythology)
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Very musical verse . Kind of bounces along.
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Thanks, M! It’s the hollow feeling which comes from pining that I wanted to bring out…
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It worked!!
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*sigh* beautiful….
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Thanks, Sonya! Means a lot coming from you 🙂
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Rose petals and lustrous pearls
A sonorous harp, wine and viand
Courting the senses, tempting suppressed desire
Gosh! this is absolutely divine! Beautifully penned!
Thank you so much for participating Kunal 😀
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Two kinds of love, Sanaa…. The cosmic divine and the earthly! I’m a believer in both!
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“Plastic smiles and suitors with invitations to dance / Empty merriment, strangers with words of mindless wisdom” a part of life too, glad you included this…and of course the wait for Him…love well expressed…
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Thank you, Sumana!
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This is a fine Valentine’s poem. You too echoed of petals, satin, pillows, etc. You know romance I can tell. May your Valentine’s be all that you described here. Happy V my friend.
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Thank you, James! The days of old fashioned romance have all but gone… 😔. But all the same, you have a good one! God bless!
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“As I wait for him” Yes, it is wise to wait for the true love.
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True! Although this was more about imagining Radha’s thought as she waited for her divine love, Krishna
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Ahh, I see
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Amazing lines… loved it 🙂
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Thanks!
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This builds up so perfectly to waiting for the Beloved. Yes, a very real and then divine poem. Beautiful.
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Thanks so much! Glad you liked it!
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Wonderful! Radha was indeed madly in love with Krishna but then Meera was deeply devoted. Whose love is greater?
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You got me there! 🙂 Thanks for stopping by! This is one of my fave pieces, even if it’s among my earlier ones
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I wonder how I missed this one. I can see why it would be one of your favourites. It is beautifully written in a stream of consciousness kind of way. The rich imagery makes you feel like you are stepping into a dream. An interesting counterbalance/contrast between the exquisite and the ordinary, the magnificent and the mundane, the dream and the reality. Then again in a dreamworld with heightened senses, even the mud smells good! Another sensual feast! Well done Kunal!
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Wow, what a lovely compliment! Thank you so very much!
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My pleasure indeed!
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Beautifully penned, Kunal! This, the ultimate love story for me… always!
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It’s also my story in reverse 😀
Alas and alack!
Thanks, V
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😄! Loved it!
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Thanks so much Kunal – this is such a stunning write. Gorgeous in every sense of the word — and then the end just wrapped around my heart – waiting for Him! 🙂 Wow!!!! Thank YOU! Jai Sri Krishna! Radhe Radhe! 🙂
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